Reviews for Someone Say Something
XxNoImaginationxX chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
If only it were that simple to make someone live.

Really nice poem. I really like that line:

"Following to the calm chaos

Of the unknown."

Though as it is unknown one really doesn't know what it is... if that makes sense.

Anyways... You spelt heart wrong on fifth line. And if that wasn't an error, I don't think it makes sense..
DiaRose chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
That's sweet. I understand.


rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Beautiful flow, and an amazing build up.

I love the title, and I love how it ties in with the ending line.

Lovely work! :D