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for shame chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
this whole thing is amazing.

i like the descriptions about tokyo girls.

there are so many small phrases or sentences that read like afterthoughts, like parenthetical statements, but they carry so much power. for some reason, i really like "only in the suburbs."

i also like the idea of leaning like heat-seeking missiles. i've never been a mountain kind of girl, but i may change my mind after reading this poem.