Reviews for Water Girl
The Way Of The Broken chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
I relate to this a lot...a little too much...
i think that maybe chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
"ohh, beware the flood"

there is something so powerful in that.

only suggestion would be to place more with the rhyming; try to find some non-literal ones.
Dashboard Dusk chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Heh, I was talking with GWS and co. in the chatroom, and when she said that you wrote a song, I was all "WTF WHERE'S THE LINK" because it hadn't shown up yet in my mail. ;P Always excited when you write something. *eaten*

In short, I thought it was awesome. :D

...Yeah, short, because I'm lazy as ever. XP It's a curse. *guillotine'd*