Reviews for Where Dad Went Wrong
Ruby Kart chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Rather sad poem. But, it seems as if writing this might have been some sort of therapy for you. Writing can be one of the most powerful fixes in our lives, giving us the chance to put in words what we wouldn't say by word of mouth.

Vocabulary is definitely strong here. So is your imagery. "You have adulterated my heart against you" Probably the strongest point you've made here. It was his own actions that have caused you to perceive him this way.

Very good poetry. I know a lot of people who would do well to read this.
Casino Kat chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
awwe. this is really sad. but its aslo really good. :/