Reviews for Loved The Most
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
''Standing still is the correct and roborant move'' I especially liked that but this whole piece is wonderful. Keep it Up!
Punslinger chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Not exactly an uplifting pep talk for falling in love, but you give me pause to think. "Time flies by with her broken Wing..." I like that line, and "...your heartbroken shadow."
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I like the balance of sentiments here. Some morbidity.. But seems loving enough :)
nickyO chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Really good. Love the title, love the work, a sentiment I haven't seen expressed very often.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Fall's lonely days

Drop into points

Filling no voids;

Making no lines

Where words would wince

To make heart's space;

Is time soul's mark

In second's felt

To mark life's pace?

p.s. OK,— it's winter here & it's not winter there, but that's life.
Airlia Alala chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I like this poem as I found it thought provoking. I love the last two lines 'To make but I've had enough, Of your heartbroken shadow.' I think that they paint a good image for the reader. Good job!

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