|Reviews for Loved The Most|
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
''Standing still is the correct and roborant move'' I especially liked that but this whole piece is wonderful. Keep it Up!
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Not exactly an uplifting pep talk for falling in love, but you give me pause to think. "Time flies by with her broken Wing..." I like that line, and "...your heartbroken shadow."
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I like the balance of sentiments here. Some morbidity.. But seems loving enough :)
| nickyO chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Really good. Love the title, love the work, a sentiment I haven't seen expressed very often.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Fall's lonely days
Drop into points
Filling no voids;
Making no lines
Where words would wince
To make heart's space;
Is time soul's mark
In second's felt
To mark life's pace?
p.s. OK,— it's winter here & it's not winter there, but that's life.
| Airlia Alala chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I like this poem as I found it thought provoking. I love the last two lines 'To make but I've had enough, Of your heartbroken shadow.' I think that they paint a good image for the reader. Good job!