I loved the poem in this chapter. You do such an amazing job with Devon's poems. They are well written and so thought out, I wish we could read more of these poems!

This is so cool and amazing, thank you!

Thank you! This is amazing.

This is so sad.

This is so sweet. I listened to the song So Real, watched the music video, and learned that Jeff Buckley died. So sad, so real.

Real Cute

I love this series! I really enjoyed reading this even though I could never love Devon as much as Jonah ;) I also really liked the way all your characters are so realistic! It makes me feel like I really know them

Oh my god. When I read the summary I laughed at the implied Danielle-Devon pairing. It was so, uh, random for lack of better word. And funny to imagine.

But when I read about Gracie and Jonah, I forgot everything and went to becoming a squeeling mess. Again. I just love them! I'm so totally

I don't know why it took me so long (okay it was less than a week, but still) to start this.

I already ABSOLUTELY love it!

You're writing is spectacular, I hope you are aware of that(:

Brittney(:

Oh hell yeah, a blue-haired groom.

Good job! I really appreciated the subtlety of the awkwardness Danielle created with Devon when they were in Kansas. I love the characters (everybody). The obsessing over the practice marriage is realistic. Danielle's confusion about Devon is not contrived. I like Etienne and the size of his role. Devon and his family are so great! I wish I knew them! The wacky vs believable ratio balanced well for me.

Thank you!

Awesome story! I really liked it, and the characters are all amazing and believable. Your writing is so great that I can feel what the characters do as I read it. I wanted to tell you when I read the first story, but I forgot, but it is ok cause it is still relevant. I reallllly love how you wrote Jonah, I think he is my favorite. Just his humor, and romance and everything. Anyways, thanks for sharing!

Great! Keep writing!3

First Jonah, now Devon! Your male leads are stealing my heart here!

GOSH I WANNA KICK DANI U KNOW D WAY SHE IS EYING my JONAH ND GRACE DAT SICK..COZ GRACE GOT HER HAPPYNESS JUST NOW ..I DNT WANT ANYONE TO TAKE DAT AWAY FRM JONAH ND GRACE NO ONE i love dem d marriage thing is so sweet waiting to read abut dem

it!
An uncoventional relationship, but I'm glad it worked out.
This story was creative and entertaining, not cliche at all.
Keep up the awesomeness!