I read this the day you posted it on my phone. And then re-read it a few days later. And then re-read it right now :D

I thought the leap was awesome. I am proud of Danielle. And the epilogue brought out this entire picture of happily ever after which utter fluff could not have.

However, since the two hadn't seen each other for the last few chapters, I felt the absence of fluff cut right through my heart by the time the story ended. Now, I KNOW they have never been very fluffy people - but it hurts just the same :D

Honestly, though, I think you did really well with this story :)

Congratulations!

Yay! They're together now! Finally. That was really awesome. I enjoyed this story very much.:)

YAY, Danielle and Devon... le sigh so wonderful. I like the ending.

You own a bakery? :O that sounds so cool. Foodyum

IT'S OVER!

NO!

hehe

good thing we have the next one though.

but honestly, this was amazing.

i love you catherine

and hhehe love the last two lines

holy mother of god.

this is amazingness.

AMAZINGNESS, I TELL YOU.

i mean, i miss the old devon and everything but now he sounds so freaking sexy and he still has the same awesome personality and ep.

epilogue here i come.

carlin. is. an. asshole.

that really pissed me off.

AGH.

lol i love your AN!

may it rest in peace... LMAO!

AH.

omg. i am freaking out.

omg.

catherine.

omg.

ah, so she admits it!

hehehhee.

so intense.

honestly, i think devon should apologize to HER!

hmph.

NO!

so sad!

why was he so mean?

i understand where danielle is coming from!

holy crap. f yes.

what.

i just realized you might not know it's amanda.

HAHAHAAHAHAHAHA.

i changed my username.

you like?

lolz.

sorry, i had too much thanksgiving food apparently.

GUESS WHO IS FINALLY GETTING AROUND TO READING IT?

ME.

Hehehe.

Ah, that was awesome.

But seriously, Danielle, you are going to fall in love... with Devon. MUHAHAHA.

Aww that was so sweet :) I love their relationship...made me smile, thanks!

Holy crap! That was awesome ma petite! Oh look Etienne rubbed off on me. Joy, I've always wanted the personality of a gay french men. YA-no. That was definetely and ending I didn't see coming. I was wondering how you were going to pull it off in one chapter but you did so marvelously. ANd we saw Jonah the love guru! YAY JONAH! Etienne the matchmaker was fun but not as fun as Jonah since it's fun to see practical Jonah give advice like that. AND DEVON! YAY! Omigosh you just ended that perfectly with the Hulk shirt and then the shoving of the ring into Devons unwilling hands and then BLUE HAIRED WEDDING! *Sigh* very happy now. All we need is true love for Sarah amd everyone's happy. That and for her and Gracie to make up. Yes that ws another truly awesome story that I loved loved loved! Hope you write more soon.

-Tilly