|Reviews for Return The Favour|
| Lexie.Loo chapter 2 . 6/28/2016
I agree with RNh and some of the other reviewers, this screams rape culture and is just so not okay. I can get past the clichéd story premise, but the boys use of their 'rating' system sickens me. Won't be continuing this one.
| MisStruck chapter 33 . 6/15/2016
Thanks for the story, it was fun reading it. I like Leah and Ryan and their story.
| HeyyyitsPickle chapter 33 . 1/15/2016
Hey! Don't take it down please, regardless of the grammar mistakes or whatever else it's still a very good story and I sometimes go back to read all the stories I've put into my favorites, this being one of them!
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/13/2016
keep return the favor please!
| creole chapter 32 . 1/5/2015
What infuriates me is the fact that they did something like that in the first place, something so despicable and disgusting as to bet on a girl like shes trash. I mean could you imagine if he didnt fall for her? Or if she just wasnt his type no matter how kind she is? Then what? I bet they wouldnt have stopped the game and continued sexually assaulting girls in the guise of rating them. Wouldnt it have continued? All of the guys here disgust me.
| RNh chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
That entire chapter screamed 'rape culture'. Sorry, but I definitely won't continue this story.
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/22/2013
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| Guest chapter 22 . 4/5/2013
I like this story... but for some reason it sounds a lot like Full Court Press. Maybe next time you should make up a story with your own ideas, cause I totally noticed the fact that its almost the same in some areas of the story as
Full Court Press.
| Kelsey chapter 32 . 3/5/2013
I LOVE IT
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
where can I find the rest of the chapters ?
| attention-to-detail chapter 32 . 6/7/2012
Aha! I love this story, it was one of the first ones I ever read on here!
| The Imagination Addict chapter 28 . 10/24/2011
i have to say, i like the confrontation you wrote! i muled over things and decided that even though i felt she should be logical and know that ryan's feelings are real since he stayed with her, her first reaction would no doubt be emotional. and i find that the chapter following her finding out has been written well. i like that she actually asks what the terms of the bet were and conveys her broken heart in a very dignified manner and then punches charlie and says ryan's still a better man even though he hurt her. so though it's a cliche on this site, you've done it well :)
| The Imagination Addict chapter 27 . 10/24/2011
eh. your writing's pretty good, in terms of your ability to use the language. a few inconsistencies with the tenses here and there, but nothing too major. i have to say that the plot is very draggy, though. doesn't help that it's kinda cliche too. but at least your writing's been pleasant enough for me to keep reading.
| Nique13 chapter 21 . 10/23/2011
I laughed as he linked his hands with mine over the table connecting his eyes with mine, "But honestly, you looked beautiful tonight and I mean that. You're the most beautiful girl in this room and in our school and I'm glad you're mine."
Wasn't she the only girl in the room?
| Warrior-Princess06 chapter 32 . 10/3/2011
OHMYGOODNESS! I'm finally done reading ALL the CHAPTERS within 24 hours. I only had a limited hours of sleeping because of school works but I spent it by reading this fic..! HEHE! :D I SUPER DUPER LOVE IT! I love this kind of fic.! :)) I love the plot of this fic..very unpredictable, unique, interesting and full of surprises.! :D Congratulations for this perfectly awesome, wonderful, amazing and well-written fic.! :D Thanks for sharing your imagination to us..! :D This fic gave me a lot of mixed emotions..you made me sad, happy, fantastic, enthusiastic and crazy for this fic.! HAHA! I really have fun reading this. Keep up the good work and good job! :D
I love Leah and Ryan to the FULLEST. They're such a perfect couple. I'm glad that they ended up together. Even though, so many things happened, they managed to overcome all the obstacles and problems in their relationship. I really love it that they really in love with each other even though it all started with a bet. haha! :))
I love the Wescott Family. :)) Ryan's parents, brother and sister, grandparents, cousins and relatives. I really love them. They really treasure their family gatherings. And I love how close they are to each other. :)))
I love Trey and Natalia. Same with Parker and Layla. Matthew and Danielle too. I'm glad after 6 years of being in a relationship, they're going to married soon. :))
Delia is so adorable and cute. I love her too. HAHA! :))
What a Great family..hehe! I really really love the Wescott Family. I love the way you ended this fic, very successful.! :))
I love their friends too. I love Hannah and Trent. I cried when Trent and Mitch graduated. I hope they overcome the long distance relationship. :)
I love Mitch and Amy. I like how overprotective Mitch to Leah. - I envy Leah. I just hope I had a brother too. :((
I love Owen and Liz too. hehe! :)) And also Serena. :))
I hate Leah and Mitch parents. What kind of parents they are? tsk. I'm glad their grandparents going to celebrate family holidays with them from now on. :))
I hate Charlie to the highest level. He's so disgusting. Eww.
I hate Nicola too for what she did to Leah. What a bit*h. tsk.
Anyways, I'm sorry if I didn't review each chapter. Maybe if I came here around the time when you still writing this fic, I'm definitely going to leave review, but I am not..so yeah.! :)) Congratulations again and Until next time.! :))
P.S: Did I say I love this fic? HAHA! Sorry, I just really LOVE it. I love this fic from the beginning to the end.! :)) Awesome! :)) Definitely One of my favorite stories ever.! :D