|Reviews for There For You|
| phungelisa chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
this is going pretty well in my opinion XD i hope an update comes soon
| innocent as far as you know chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
this is so cool! what if he pulled some kinda law thing that says that quibilah has to stay there and then her school group trys to get her back? update soon!
| Cairi-Chesh chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
That was amazing! PLEASE write more! I loved it.
| Egie chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
This story rocks! Can't wait for the update! ;)
| Ghost n' Ghoul Girl chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
like it so far, update soon!
| 039301 chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Hey, this story sounds very good so far and I hope that you will continue it. I look forward to seeing how you develop the story. Besides Anhur sounds like a hottie! Haha good luck writing and happy holidays!
| Kikto-chan chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Nice start, the story is progressing pretty well. However, it seems to need so more depth, like a better transition between places, and also you can start some sentances in a different way, like have a mixture of passive and active voice. Because now the writing isn't changing, thus it gets a little redundent. But I do like your plot, and can't wait to see what happens next.
Kikto-chan signing out!