|Reviews for Battlescars|
| Child of the Creatures chapter 3 . 1/22/2010
Nice chapter! I'm very happy that she left that creepy boyfriend! But, I wish this guy would come back, he seems nice. And I she needs a man who is steady in her life...(But that's just my opinion.)
Anyway, great story! Keep writing!
(P.s: Do you think you could review a few of my poems some time? You don't have to, but I would really appreciate it...)
| Child of the Creatures chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
I mean, it was kind of sad...with the creepy boyfriend and all...But it was still well-written! I really liked the quote at the begining...nice touch.
| Child of the Creatures chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
This is really a well-written poem. I love how you Incorporated the flowers...Never thought flowers and addiction could go together...
Anyway, great poem!
| MidnightSun95 chapter 2 . 1/9/2010
wow, the poem was beautiful, and I think you should continue with the segment about addiction. It was very well described. I could nearly put myself in her position and feel her pain when she needed the drugs. Good job!
| visayshi chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
i said i'd return the review :)
i liked this poem, i got this nice, sad feeling when i read it good job!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
In life's garden blooms green hope
Hidden under mint leaves
Like brown dappled toad;
Brushing softly lavender
Spiced air tells butterfly
Of grey snake's slither;
Trimming basil crowning seeds
Thumb and finger smell sweet
From their murderous deeds;
But my favourite is white rose
For she tends blanch friendship
With sharp thorns in rows.
p.s. Thx for looking at my krz poems.