Uhh, Ash really isn't a likeable person. And Tyler is distracted to easyly. Poor Ollie.

I love this story ! And I hate the fox ! haha ;)

Man I Love Tyler.. But Really Hate His Boyfriend. He's A Creep Lol

I liked this chapter, it explains some of Oliver's problems some more. And I really can't wait to see Oliver paying back Ashley. Pretty please? And I'd like to shake Tyler a bit for being an idiot, but otherwise the story wouldn't work, would it?

I really like this story! I can't wait for something to happen between Tyler and Oliver Eliot. ;)

Oh no! Poor Oliver...

Ash is a jerk but he's sort of awesome in a way too, I don't like him though he's a twit xD

Awesome chapter by the way -

-Squeals.- You finally updated! Ash is...a bitch? (Harsh _). Poor naive Oliver he's not upset that Ash thought he was gay. He's upset with the fact that he was not the one in Tyler's lap (or mouth?) XD I'm sorry I had to say. Update soon!

~*AWW*~

Hah, this time FP let me review, at least I hope so.

I think Megan is too curious and Oliver should have said less, but hey that's the way sisters are *sigh*

So I think there are many interesting twist in this story and I'd like to read more.

~aditus

See, i am one of those, who haven't reviewed yet. I really like this story. Even if i think Ollie really is kind of a strange jerk, i like him. And Grace and her family is just to cool. Very lively characters.;)

O_O' Love this story! It's freaking awesome! I can't wait for more...Sorry if this review sounds slightly stupid xD. I just really like it.

I like this story alot. I can't wait until Ollie goes to "school", us kids and teens nightmare! XD Anyways, I want to ask why does this story only have 13 views! (14 now because of me)

Update soon!

~*AWW*

OH MY GOSH it was great...i actually believed for a split second that tyler was drowning it was really cool and i hope u upload soon...and i really wasnt expecting tyler to kis oliver...hihi...awesome cant wait to read more :)

Good thing “little boy who cried wolf” didn’t happen. That *would* have been bad. I don’t really have much to say, but I loved this chapter, that little kiss of theirs was so cute. 3

~Nya! _

hey your story is really good and i really like it...kep up the updating cauz i would love to read more and i wanna know what happens to tyler ...the story is just so addicting i cant stop reading haha...and yeah like i said before its very up the good work :)

I like the story but your grammar is terrible. A beta would be a good idea. Other than that I think this story has a good plot and can't wait for some romance to kick in ;)

update soon!

HGS