|Reviews for until the sun shines,|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
"caution: my mind is under construction." catchy opening line.
"my body is just tried of trying to recover." i really like the tone of this line - it's very raw and emotional.
| Mister Bo Jangles chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
"these cloudy days make me miss you more than usual
i've missed the sun for the last few days, i've missed the shine
i miss you laying next to me, knowing you'll always be mine."
I love this. Well done!