All I know right now is that I love this.

Seriously, the sentences, the sentence structure (and lack thereof) just caught me by my heart and tugged.

You haven't written words but emotions. Bravo!

This is beautiful! Too bad you can't send it to him...or are not? Unless he does read your stuff haha.

This is simply beautiful! :) I think it would make a great song too.

I don't know if I can adequetly review this ... since it's not a normal story, I cant really gush on and on about the characters and the dialogue...

However, what I can say is this: Beautiful in its simplicity, you are fantastic at unlocking emotions and provoking thoughts with mere choppy sentence fragments.

Now thats talent.

Honestly, that sort of made me go oh...on the outside too. Too bad you can't say that to her...or have you?

Sometimes I wonder if it's all really worth it..going through all that. You know you love or at the very least loved the person but then sometimes you can't look past all the hell it was. Just frustrating.

I hope it's okay I am commenting on this haha..sometimes I feel like I shouldn't because they are so personal but...you really did word this very well. Packs all the punch of a real punch.

I hatee that situation...where someone puts you to the point of just giving up. It's just dumb.

0_0

Dunno who it is, but I'm sure I'll agree...

It's hard to put into words the emotion I felt reading this.

I'm actually afraid of not being able to adequately convey my opinion of this chapter.

So, I'll keep it simple.

*hug*

I was pretty random I guess...Some type of extreme frustration overcoming the physical ability of a person...Loved it!