Reviews for typed, but not written
YourCritic chapter 12 . 7/4/2011
All I know right now is that I love this.

Seriously, the sentences, the sentence structure (and lack thereof) just caught me by my heart and tugged.

You haven't written words but emotions. Bravo!
laurenmlbc chapter 10 . 10/31/2010
This is beautiful! Too bad you can't send it to him...or are not? Unless he does read your stuff haha.
laurenmlbc chapter 9 . 9/1/2010
This is simply beautiful! :) I think it would make a great song too.
l'heure bleue chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
I don't know if I can adequetly review this ... since it's not a normal story, I cant really gush on and on about the characters and the dialogue...

However, what I can say is this: Beautiful in its simplicity, you are fantastic at unlocking emotions and provoking thoughts with mere choppy sentence fragments.

Now thats talent.
lauren89 chapter 5 . 3/22/2010
Honestly, that sort of made me go oh...on the outside too. Too bad you can't say that to her...or have you?
lauren89 chapter 4 . 3/22/2010
Sometimes I wonder if it's all really worth it..going through all that. You know you love or at the very least loved the person but then sometimes you can't look past all the hell it was. Just frustrating.
lauren89 chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
I hope it's okay I am commenting on this haha..sometimes I feel like I shouldn't because they are so personal really did word this very well. Packs all the punch of a real punch.
lauren89 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I hatee that situation...where someone puts you to the point of just giving up. It's just dumb.
Neogami chapter 5 . 3/22/2010

Dunno who it is, but I'm sure I'll agree...
Neogami chapter 4 . 1/11/2010
It's hard to put into words the emotion I felt reading this.

I'm actually afraid of not being able to adequately convey my opinion of this chapter.

So, I'll keep it simple.

MeAsIAm chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
I was pretty random I guess...Some type of extreme frustration overcoming the physical ability of a person...Loved it!