|Reviews for Of Straight Teeth & Crooked Morals|
| Elisa Diane chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
I'm interested. I don’t know how old you are, but am assuming rather young, for obvious reasons. You write well for your age and I am curious to see what you will become as a writer with a little praise and a little polish. A suggestion to help you exceed your potential: if you've ever seen it written before, don’t write it. Avoid clichés like the plague. Nothing is auburn brown, there are no wry glances. It is difficult, but you must rise above the bullshit everyday heard it a million times lines others pile on shamelessly, and make your own brand new shining amazingness. I wouldn’t be telling you this besides the fact that (god forgive me) you’re the only person who’s work I’ve even considered reading on this site.
And you know, don’t give up.
PS: I like your titles