Reviews for Bitter Sweet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good writing skills ur awesome |
![]() ![]() I hope you continue soon, this is one of my favorite stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...If I were Hannah I would forgive them...but I would find new friends because thats alot of drama to deal with, plus it might be awkward for some of them,oh! i would like to see her and Thomas become friends! that would like spark up some more drama lol but thats just my opinion xD Great chapter btw! :) |
![]() ![]() I was confused throughout the last half of the chapter.. but good job! |
![]() ![]() how old are they all? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those are some crap friends she has there. I think her confronting logan is good and if she decides to leave her 'friends' for good then i'd be very happy for her do you think you could write a bit more on thomas cos i quite like his character but there isn't really much on him. Could you please update soon? Pretty pretty please with cherry on top :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel bad for Hannah. She should keep her distance for a bit to see if she can really trust them. Maybe she should go to Thomas, he seems to care a lot about her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well the fact that there just like 'oh you can be in the group again' seemed so dumb, not that they wanted her but that they were just willing to let her back in because they felt bad, not because they're any true type of friends, and that's why i don't think she should forgive them so easily if they truly care about her they should have to go through a lot more trouble than that. But Aubrey though her i think she is completely genuine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Hannah should end up with Thomas, he seems to actually care about her. Jo and Logan should get hit by a bus...lol i'm just joking...alittle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to be brutally honest... Logan is coming off as a serious asshole, what with the being in the bathroom with Jo and whatnot. I mean, they could have totally been talking, but I'm with Hannah on that one. But I'm not with her on her treatment of Tommy. I think you should have Tommy in there more. Have her spend time with both guys (Tommy and Logan) so that your readers get a feel for their personalities. There just isn't enough in it to decide who I want Hannah to be with. They both come off kind of...well...no offense...lame. |
![]() ![]() I really like it, and I don't know I really want Hannah and Logan together but maybe Thomas and her are better. Especially if Jo and him were really doing what it seems they were dong. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() IM START9NG TO HATE LOGAN |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel sorry for Hannah. I hope everything gets better for her soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow... Logan and jo? I now hate logan! and her friends for abandoning her! Grr! lol But I LOVE this story! More soon pretty please! *puppy dog eyes* :) |
![]() ![]() I love this so much, I really can't wait to read more. Keep it up and please update it soon. |