|Reviews for Forever Yours|
| Chckadee123 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
You know how much I adore this story.
I still have your rough draft copy and I look at it every now and then. I actually did cry when I read it. It tugged at my heart strings and enjoyed it much. Definitely a favorite of mine. B]
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
I loved the idea and the relationship between these two characters. It was so sweet and beautiful and really gave the story life. :)
One thing I didn't like was the grammar and structure errors littered throughout the story. You omitted a lot of commas and that made the otherwise cute dialogue choppy, and once or twice you forgot to hit enter to separate paragraphs. Little details like that made the story less enjoyable because it distracted from the message.
Good job on this!