Reviews for Ups and Downs
MapleSyrup chapter 3 . 8/31/2010
I really like the last chapter most of all. :)

The cute part was Liam with snow in his hair. I just found that cute :O
yinachan chapter 2 . 6/3/2010
It is sad, but strangely, I can't feel the emotions of the character... Maybe you should describe it a bit more...

But aside from that, this was a good chapter... :)
yinachan chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Wow. I like this.. :)

That aside, there were a few missing punctuation marks here.. You should read this chapter over and insert them...

Anyway, I enjoyed this. Thanks for letting me read this. :)

Keep writing! XD
firefly114 chapter 2 . 1/9/2010
This was a very intense chapter and it skipped around less. Nice work.
firefly114 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Good opening scene. The dialogue is funny and Stefan seems cute!

Watch out for switching verb tenses

Wow, everything happens so fast! I can't believe they're having a baby already. The end of this chapter seemed very rushed, though.

A great start!
wakeupeveryone chapter 3 . 12/17/2009
good story so far. it was a little confusing with how much time was jumping around but it's good.