Reviews for Badass Dialogue for Creative Writing
TymCon chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
is cameron a girl or boy? Well nice story:P Youre moms hilarious:D
Mizzuz Spock chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
All right. So this was funny in some parts. (Seriously. Why couldn't I have a mom like that? xD)

My biggest problem was that I couldn't tell whether Cameron was a guy or a girl. (Because I've known all kinds of people named Cameron.) So the interpretation of Cameron's reaction to the rumor about Jonah could be different, depending on whether it was a girl or boy. (In my head, at first, Cameron was a guy. Then I started to wonder...)

That's the only thing I think you should maybe make clear. Other than that, as far as dialogue, it's quick, witty, and clean. No confusion except the Cameron thing. xD

Good job and happy writing! Hope you get a good grade in CW class! ;]
Caseus chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
LOL you submitted it! And you got a review that wasn't from me! XD

Yayayayayayz Jonah. And I would be a bitch and tell you you're forgetting a "t" in your title, but I'm not going to ;)
eaststar chapter 1 . 12/8/2009