LOL I can see why Santa doesn't enjoy when people call 911 on him. I'm curious how the 911 call would go if Bella did call them. "911 what's your emergency?" "There's this really skinny guy in my house, dressed in red. He's leaving presents under our tree and claims he's Santa." "That's Santa Claus! It's Christmas! Now don't call us again unless you have a real emergency." XD
Anyways please update soon :3

LOL I take it your plan is for sort of a Santa/Bella romance right? That sounds like it could pretty neat and funny too! I love the characters so far. :D

lol love the name! This story seems interesting so I'm really excited to read on! :D

Are you going to write anymore?

WHERES THE REST? D: I want more sexy santa! ;)

Ahh...I remember the days I believed in Santa. I can relate to Bella, although not exactly. I just figured out that Santa didn't exist...Hm...Maybe your story will change my mind about that?

'Santa land' he he. Anyways, i'm finding this story pretty awesome dude and you really should contine. I can't wait till the romance begins.

(from the gossip forum)

This story is awesomly wicked. Megan is so cute and I love dexter. I have no idea how you thought of this random idea but it's getting pretty interesting.

Hmm... interesting. This seems quite unique and looks like it has potential and even though it's short, it's still got me hooked.

i love the concept of this story. It's slightly weird, but i love that.

Its nice having a hot santa for once, i agree.

I can't wait to read the rest :)

~WriterOnTheMove~

It's cute. Still in progress obviously, but so far it's a very nice story. I'm interested in how it turns out.

''Because if there was then he would be fat, old, and very ugly.'' Bella is awesome. ;)

I love that last line. :D

It's a wonderful story, it feels real, in a magical way. I wish I found this during Christmas time because it's a lovely story to read. But it works as well for any time of the year.

Hope you write more soon!

Aw, Megan is so cute.

'but it was something she had to do, so Megan wouldn't grow up living lies.' I have to say I really like this line. It's so honest.

Good job stopping the story here. I love suspense. Santa Claus is hot? Hahaha. :)

It's just a prologue, but already says so much. 'Sadly that wish didn't come true.' That part is so sad, yet beautiful. I like your style of writing, because I am one who notices story telling styles and simple sentences.

I think this will be a very interesting story, I'll read on to see if I'm right. ;)

lol aww so sweet haha the police haha. aww santa land? ive never heard of that one before lol. o they are going to the North polee. FUN. please update eagerr to find out whats happening)