Reviews for Hidden
emjaykirkland chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Hmm. I like your writing style, but you always seem to write poetry rhyming by two lines. I can't remember which one that's called, but maybe try writing in a different form? It might be more interesting to the readers than having the same beat over and over, if you know what I mean...
Yaoigoddess01 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
I still don't know if I would be happy that they could see or ashamed that I let my mask slip.
UnpredictableMe chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
WOW such feeling... these sound like dark self death deciding poems... Are you over those feelings or are they written for a person who would feel that way?
LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
This is really good. The rhythm is great. I only found 2 lines that don't flow as well as the rest:

"Dawn breaks and so does will"

"My own veins beg for a drought"

Other than that, great job!