Reviews for Solo
tila tequila chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
amazing:] you aren't deluded!
frugale chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Wow. What a remarkably crafted piece of work.
SarahMerriman chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Wow, this poem is very identafiable (I appologize if this is not the correct word). I think a lot of people have gone through something like this. You portrayed it very well and in a beautiful way. I like the fact that you are able to write about things like this without it sounding too angsty. Good job.
BethTheServant chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Aw :). I love how this can be taken in a musical form or a physical form. For me the two blend together. I love how the last line lingers in my mind. Great word choice!

-Beth
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
This is so lovely and sad! Perfect!
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Oh I love the metaphor here.

The last stanza was amazingly powerful.

Great work :)
xXxHolyFlame15FireIcexXx chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Your doing great. See your a better poet than me keep it up. I can't wait for your next poems
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I really like this.

'aching in the white spaces and rests

for what was always meant to be a duet.'

Wonderful ending!

You have expressed a deep feeling through simple words. It's great. Keep writing.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Aww :(

It starts off with a clich├ęd pattern, only to take the reader by surprise by the end. This is such an original thought.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Oh a very sad piece. I especially like the ending even if it's very heartbreaking. Please keep writing.

Anna _
Punslinger chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
A heartbreakingly beautiful portrait of the loneliness of two separated halves that should be rejoined.
purple-fairy-dust212 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
this was beautiful :)
RespiriMusica chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
love it. Sounds like you draw your inspiration from a painful past. I think you channel it quite well if thats the case.