Reviews for Something New |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, I really enjoyed it! :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() The past few events were predictable and cliche, but still enjoyable just the same. I wonder what's going to happen~ :] *continues reading* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so interesting, I can't seem to stop reading it! Even though I'm incredibly OC, I don't even mind the grammatical errors, but I still think I should point them out if you ever decide to rewrite this story or proofread: confusion with the use of "your" and "you're" - "your" indicates possession; "you're" "you are" usage of "Me and Jace" as subjects of the sentence - it should be in subjective form, therefore, "Jace and I" Those two are the main errors - I won't bother to discuss the use of possessive pronouns before gerunds because that seems to be a very common error anyway. Overall, I'm really enjoying this story! Can't stop reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jace is so mean. Hmph. *continues reading* |
![]() ![]() ![]() im glad they are back together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Story. I enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw cute ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! it's over . Sigh . ANYWAYS, LOVE ,LOVE, LOVE the story . Awesome , amazing , fantastic job . |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! I do not want it to end . O'well. Anyways , Good job and good luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() it better be good news the hospital's calling about...don't you dare kill jace! (oh, and there were a few errors in there too) other that, awesome, and please don't kill jace, because i think i might cry if you do... ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job . Can't wait to see what happens . Take your time . Good job & Good Luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh def sequel. im naht sure what will happen, and you better not kill jace even though he's an asshole. gabe, not sure i like him he's a little too nosy. you don't ask a girl if she had sex with her ex-boyfriend on the first date. who does that? so scratch out gabe, and if wynter gets back with jace (which im thinking would be a little better because i feel sorry for him) jace better have a damn good reason why he f* #ed up her reputation and a freaking great apology. don't kill jace, though. DON'T. and update soon, please, i love this story, and sad to see it end. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story . I don' want it to end but every story has to end . |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw its almost over! noo! lets see, i'm not really sure who wynter should be with. i mean no lie jace will always be a douche-bag and im not too forgiving about what he did...so i don't think wynter should be with him anymore even if i did feel a little sympathetic towards him after reading this chapter. it still doesn't justify that jace completely trashed her reputation and made her look like a slut! i don't know about gabe, or if he's a nice guy...so thats a question mark there...but if wynter ends up with anyone it'd be him, and then jace will be in the sidelines watching the two and realizing what he lost by doing the stupidest thing in the world. she still needs some time to grieve over the broken heart she suffers, so she can't just magically jump up and be healed because broken hearts hurt, you know? anyways, there's the other possibility where gabe can just be wynter's really awesome friend who sticks by her like jade. it's your story, but those are some ideas, anyways, i'm so sad its almost over! i'll stop babbling now, but love it so far! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe , just maybe , something happens between gabe and wynter, and jace see, blah blah blah . Gabe would be good to put in the story . Anyways good job . Love the story . Sad it will end soon . :( |