| Reviews for Short and Sweet |
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   lymli chapter 7 . 12/3/2010 aw, that's... I like the ending, it's as ig the magic finished. |
| Creeping Collarbones chapter 5 . 5/5/2010 This really strikes me as haunting. I think this is one of my favorite haikus! Nice work! |
| The Wilted Gardenia chapter 7 . 4/29/2010 Emphasises emotions and speaks a metaphorical truth, while staying "short and sweet". These would make good quotes. ) |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 7 . 3/3/2010 That is so sad, and describes perfectly the relationship my friend has with her crush. .thinking |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 6 . 3/3/2010 Again, I know exactly what you mean. I love the use of "stranded." .thinking |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 5 . 3/3/2010 The sadness is so poignant. I love this one. .thinking |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 4 . 3/3/2010 I know exactly what you mean. .thinking |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 3 . 3/3/2010 Darkly beautiful. .thinking |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 2 . 3/3/2010 This is so beautiful. Ths use of wording and imagery is amazing. .thinking |
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 3/3/2010 Ha ha, this one is so true. This brings to mind images of laughter and childhood. .thinking |
| Princess-anna57 chapter 6 . 2/14/2010 I can relate to this piece right now, I know how it feels and you've conveyed it very well here. Please keep writing! Anna _ |
| Princess-anna57 chapter 7 . 2/14/2010 Aw, good haiku! Very expressive. Keep it up! Anna _ |
| Humming LadyBug chapter 7 . 2/6/2010 Ooh! This last one I really really like. So well put and relateble. Definitely short and sweet ;) |
| SirScott chapter 7 . 2/5/2010 Witty and to the point, the way they'll suppose to be. Keep up the good work. SirScott |
| fleur de l'est chapter 7 . 2/4/2010 Chocolate cakes on display with tiny free samples... ..Or other stuff.. / people / :( And I don't know if it's worse if that voice belongs to fate, tricking both the cake and the person :( |