Reviews for Short and Sweet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aw, that's... I like the ending, it's as ig the magic finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This really strikes me as haunting. I think this is one of my favorite haikus! Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emphasises emotions and speaks a metaphorical truth, while staying "short and sweet". These would make good quotes. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so sad, and describes perfectly the relationship my friend has with her crush. .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, I know exactly what you mean. I love the use of "stranded." .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() The sadness is so poignant. I love this one. .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know exactly what you mean. .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darkly beautiful. .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful. Ths use of wording and imagery is amazing. .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha, this one is so true. This brings to mind images of laughter and childhood. .thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can relate to this piece right now, I know how it feels and you've conveyed it very well here. Please keep writing! ~Anna~ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, good haiku! Very expressive. Keep it up! ~Anna~ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh! This last one I really really like. So well put and relateble. Definitely short and sweet ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Witty and to the point, the way they'll suppose to be. Keep up the good work. ~SirScott |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chocolate cakes on display with tiny free samples... ..Or other stuff.. / people / :( And I don't know if it's worse if that voice belongs to fate, tricking both the cake and the person :( |