Reviews for Short and Sweet
lymli chapter 7 . 12/3/2010
aw, that's... I like the ending, it's as ig the magic finished.
Creeping Collarbones chapter 5 . 5/5/2010
This really strikes me as haunting. I think this is one of my favorite haikus!

Nice work!
The Wilted Gardenia chapter 7 . 4/29/2010
Emphasises emotions and speaks a metaphorical truth, while staying "short and sweet". These would make good quotes. )
thinking.about.thinking chapter 7 . 3/3/2010
That is so sad, and describes perfectly the relationship my friend has with her crush.

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thinking.about.thinking chapter 6 . 3/3/2010
Again, I know exactly what you mean. I love the use of "stranded."

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thinking.about.thinking chapter 5 . 3/3/2010
The sadness is so poignant. I love this one.

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thinking.about.thinking chapter 4 . 3/3/2010
I know exactly what you mean.

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thinking.about.thinking chapter 3 . 3/3/2010
Darkly beautiful.

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thinking.about.thinking chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
This is so beautiful. Ths use of wording and imagery is amazing.

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thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Ha ha, this one is so true. This brings to mind images of laughter and childhood.

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Princess-anna57 chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
I can relate to this piece right now, I know how it feels and you've conveyed it very well here. Please keep writing!

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Princess-anna57 chapter 7 . 2/14/2010
Aw, good haiku! Very expressive. Keep it up!

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Humming LadyBug chapter 7 . 2/6/2010
Ooh! This last one I really really like. So well put and relateble. Definitely short and sweet ;)
SirScott chapter 7 . 2/5/2010
Witty and to the point, the way they'll suppose to be. Keep up the good work.

SirScott
fleur de l'est chapter 7 . 2/4/2010
Chocolate cakes on display with tiny free samples...

..Or other stuff.. / people / :(

And I don't know if it's worse if that voice belongs to fate, tricking both the cake and the person :(
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