|Reviews for Short and Sweet|
| Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 1/6/2010
Oh this has a dark creepy vibe to it, which is perfect for describing a nightmare. Wonderful work
| Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 1/6/2010
The word trembling is lovely here.
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I like this.
Simple & effective
| i think that maybe chapter 5 . 1/5/2010
raised eyebrows and a gasp to rival her wings in size...
this is heart wrenching. heart breaking even.
| i think that maybe chapter 4 . 1/5/2010
i found him.
lost him. but
knew him well.
thirteen words of straight up truth.
| i think that maybe chapter 3 . 1/5/2010
so i'll admit- i was confused at first. and then i saw the side-title. :D perfectperfectperfect. it's like just with that one word this haiku became not just one, but two, grand stories.
"watches your soul scream"
that there are such wonderful phrases coming from "simple" haikus... definitively proves they aren't so simple
| i think that maybe chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
i like that there's a certain duality here. as if autumn is personified and there's so much more to the story...
"left crushed underfoot"- i love your phrasing
| i think that maybe chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
haha cute and perfect.
i'm glad you wrote this; this is one of those things everyone does but is never noted anywhere.
| drink me pretty chapter 4 . 1/5/2010
A sad truth.
| drink me pretty chapter 3 . 1/5/2010
What a complex situation you have drawn
with so few words. The character sounds
conflicted, and that attracts my attention.
Yeah. This is my fave haiku of this collection
| gone4good chapter 5 . 1/3/2010
| tonight we bloom chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
these have got to be some of the best haikus i've read.
| fleur de l'est chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Beauty & talents unseen. Too many have felt that way. You're great at making up scenarios & metaphors :D
| fleur de l'est chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
Omg, this is such an amazing thought, and sadly so true!
| Lady Livia chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
This is super cute.
I like it very much. :)