Reviews for Double Vision
11cina24 chapter 22 . 8/22/2012
I wish you'd update):
smriti chapter 22 . 7/7/2011
oh my goddd...i love dis book...plz plz update it...
hstheatreislife chapter 22 . 12/18/2010
Please update soon I love your story
Bruhk chapter 22 . 9/1/2010
way to forget about us, we are still here waiting for you to update you know!
MyNameIs-Madison chapter 22 . 8/2/2010
update update update
BoxedxxxInnocence chapter 22 . 5/14/2010
am i only the fourth reader? ridiculous. i really like the story, and i can really feel jack as a character, even if he's... well... um, not an active character in the story, shall we say. but i dunno, the sparks are with will not adam, for me. so i hope she realises that it was will all along ;)
millienmile chapter 22 . 5/14/2010
DUDE DUDE DUDE DUDE! you gave me the amazing hot guy :D oh hell yeah :P i am so loving this :P lol anyway, narcissism aside, awesome chapter XD can't wait for the next one :P

xoxo Millie
ACKLAX3 chapter 22 . 5/13/2010
AH KEITH! haha that kid's so unique. woah at first i thought i would hate adam's date (since it wouldn't be summer) but this isabella chick seems prety awesome;) hahaha just kidding... anyways i love dan already also:D can't wait for more!
babykezyx chapter 22 . 5/13/2010
Oh my gosh! I got WILL! Thank you thank you thank you thank you THANK YOOUU! :D :D :D And Adam called me gorgeous. M, aren't I a lucky girl? ;) lol

Anyway, loved the chapter, like yayy. And I seriously did not think I would get WIILL! :D

Ok, So I'm going to shut up now about my whole euphoria (it means extreme happiness haha) and actually review this chapter properly.

So, I thought it was amazing, as always. I noticed one bit when you spelt Will without a capital but that's just coz I'm such a perfectionist haha. I YAAYY! Keith is back! I'm so happy you chose him as Summer's date. Major lols and all that XD. And more drama too so it is safe to say, this chapter has made my day! Thank you again! :D
scarletfleur chapter 22 . 5/13/2010
! The return of KEITH! so funny!

hmm, i was surprised veronica wasn't in this chapter. none of the terrible, triple v's...intriguing.

can't wait for next update!
ACKLAX3 chapter 21 . 5/12/2010
ah i loved this chapter! haha ughh i wish i got to go to greece! aw adam and summer need to go to prom together-its destiny;) haha oh and my hair is light brown-yep prety specific there:D cant wait for more!
MyNameIs-Madison chapter 21 . 5/12/2010
Oh My Cheese

Oh My Cheese

Oh My Cheese

I envy you . You got to go to Greece .

O'well.

I forgot to mention that WILL IS #1.

Adam is #1.9 .

Will , poor , poor Will . Stupid Summer . *Screams at Summer* You should have said yes . But no . You didn't .

O'well. I like them both for her , either one I mean .

Stupid Adam "likes another girl . Sure . if he does , man he bounces back fast .

Let a new boy step in .

that would be a new good twist , make him a combination of will , jack , and adam .

Congrats , on the new guy.

He sounds hot .

What is the sumary of the new story .

Maybe it will give me a suggestion for a title .

have to go .

Great job

&

Good Luck with ( insert whatever )
kellysa111 chapter 21 . 5/12/2010
One of the few stories that I actually enjoy reading. Keep updating!
scarletfleur chapter 21 . 5/12/2010
whoa...ADAM got a date? Uh-uh. No way. :( And whose Summer gonna pick? Embarrassing showing up alone after she said she got a date!

oh, will from greece sounds good. he has a hot name, good start for him! :))

p.s. i can't wait to be in hollow secrets two!

p.p.s. another AWESOME song: jimmy eat world - the middle.
millienmile chapter 21 . 5/12/2010
dude, best excuse ever! i want a surprise trip overseass! *sigh* hahaha anyway...(you know i dont think i've ever written a review without the word 'anyway'...how odd) regardless :P(see what i did that :P...yeah :$) LOL neverthless, dont worry about the short chapter, cant wait to read the next one though i have an extension english exam, a biology exam AND a soccer game so i dont know when im going to find the time :S

oh and my hair colour is a light brown, and i have blue eyes ;) lol

xoxo Millie
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