Reviews for Religious Critique
Safa Khan chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
"Into hell, like sardines, souls are crammed,"

was a particularly lovely line

I also love the imagery and the bible references )

It's a really powerful poem and I have to say great job!

If you ever come by it, you should try reading up on Islam - many of your points are discussed and explained in the Quran - in case you would like a view other than Christianity. Such as the christian idea of original sin being totally loopy ;D

And of course many of your points are very deep questions that are somewhat beyond our understanding in terms of God's reasons behind our lives, so thank you for making me think.

According to my beliefs, God welcomes questioning. And I hope to eventually have a strong enough faith to find the answers to our common questions. Your work given me religious motivation, thank you!

Great & insightful piece! Lovely work! (Y)
L-Lilith chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
"Tell me about what joins me with the damned,

Into hell, like sardines, souls are crammed,

Tell me about blasphemy and Mathew 12,

How far does it tend, and deep does it delve."

Amazing. A Thank you!
Rae Emeral chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I think that you have an amazing gift for writing, you choose great words to get your point across... and I'm really sorry you feel this way. It sounds like you wouldn't care, but I'm praying for you.