Reviews for Holiday Mishaps |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww...young love... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so I am assuming the rest of the chapter got lost in the upload, right? It was a good chapter although rather short. The only thing I would comment on is that their relationship is too goo to be true. I mean there was no getting to know each other it's basically now that they are pretending to be engaged it's just warped into a relationship. Outside of that well written and enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD classic...fiance... Wonder how far that will go... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't tell me your done! This is too good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had completely forgotten I had put this story on alert until the message appeared in my email. Those words keep dragging you back in every time you see "New Chapter". They get you every time. You rush to see what the author has written. This was definitely a great chapter. Wow the speed at how their relationship has already progressed, lol. Waiting anxiously for your next installment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() he's dreaming about her is he? it's nice having insight; knowing that the lead male is in love w/ the girl, but she doesn't know it. I love those stories. :D This chapter was great! more winter x natalia! Update soon please? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe Winter is so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Winter seems sweet :) please continue updating! i love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! im such a lousy cooker, haha. Another good chapter. I liked the part where he lifted her up. I'm pretty sure i'd be dying of a heart attack if some hot guy like winter lifted me, lol. Katie's funny and reminds me of my best friends. it's nice to see another girl in the story, we need more estrogen. good work! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey. bare with me as i tell you my proposition. 1. both of us have just posted a story-so we can relate! 2. i read ur story and i really like it (hence the review) 3. i would really like it if u could read mine in return and send me a critique! This story sounds very good. the first chapter was cute. All the characters seem really laid back so i already feel like i know them-reading it made me feel like it was my family haha. Is this whole story going to take place over the one holiday? that would be neat. I can't wait to see where u take this so update quickly. hope to hear from u. |