Reviews for Vultures
Isca chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
"The beating of their tattered wings. I am just grateful that I cannot hear my own thoughts. I know they are coming for me." Oh wow. I love these lines. I love that you metaphorically compare thoughts to the 'tattered wings' of vultures. For some reason, I think that's terribly tragic and beautiful. :)
Peachesandcream15 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
This, is brilliant. The ending is so powerful, and the way you've empahsised "A silly little toy…" makes such an impact. Such a beautiful, vivd and flowing style of wtiting, genius.

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sarainya fish chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
loves it honey :D

Its very emotional and descriptive, and although you're going to protest this its really really well written

and I adore the lyric

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