"I'm just like you, I'm stardust made"
Great line. You have a distinct way with words, but your rhythm and rhyme feel forced. I don't know if you write in free verse, but it may be something to consider.

Your killing me they are too good! :: melts:::

That's really good. You know? Very good.

VERY strong subject, I like it, a lot.

I want this one too, your are really good writer! Perfect for my music. kathryn