|Reviews for frigid flames|
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
"i blend in with the throng"
"my status is theoretical"
i like this thought too:
"beauty stays intertwined
between the lies, the dreams, the rain
truth, i'll never find"
| mzy chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This took my breath away.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
beautiful flow & imagery :)
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Ahh I am so jealous of your rhymes!
This all just flowed together so well.
My favorite part "candles flicker, shadows dance
beauty stays intertwined
between the lies"
Amazing work :)
I'm always happy to review!
| steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Great imagery. Love the flow. Each line is effective. They build up a very strong poem. Wonderful work. Keep writing!