Reviews for frigid flames
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
"i blend in with the throng"

"my status is theoretical"

i like this thought too:

"beauty stays intertwined

between the lies, the dreams, the rain

truth, i'll never find"
mzy chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This took my breath away.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
beautiful flow & imagery :)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Ahh I am so jealous of your rhymes!

This all just flowed together so well.

My favorite part "candles flicker, shadows dance

beauty stays intertwined

between the lies"

Amazing work :)

I'm always happy to review!
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Great imagery. Love the flow. Each line is effective. They build up a very strong poem. Wonderful work. Keep writing!