Reviews for Do You Remember
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Oh my god. This is my favorite piece of work I have read of yours so far. It is so easy to connect with and it breaks my heart to read it.
lipleaf chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I really liked the repetition of "Do you remember?" It gives the poem a wistful, melancholic feel that suits the mood wonderfully. One thing I find odd is how you start out with stanzas and then change to individual lines. Was that intentional, or an accident?
JinHikari chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Well, you certainly succeeded in this one. I feel like kicking the crap out of some guy now. It's really sweet and romantic. I love it. Keep up the good work.
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
aww this is soo heartbreaking. you think everything is pefect then you wake up oneday and someone ruins it unexpected. I dont know if this was your personal exprince or not But it was touching and great!I love it. Im going to check out your others now
WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
just a test to see what happens