|Reviews for falling in and out|
| nickyO chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
really good use of lower case letters and great image to thought.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
One move, yours or mine?
Fate knows how heartbeats were tossed,
Revealed through love’s mists.
Was it chess game blind?
White square to black, then checkmate?
Two & Fro motions?
X's & O's—crossed
Diagonally to form,
A line leading, where?
Tarot cards thrown down,
Heart's fortune forecast before,—
Love's whims will survive.
Spilikins’ your game,
My game always Mikado,—
Was it just the name?