Reviews for falling in and out
nickyO chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
really good use of lower case letters and great image to thought.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
One move, yours or mine?

Fate knows how heartbeats were tossed,

Revealed through love’s mists.

Was it chess game blind?

White square to black, then checkmate?

Two & Fro motions?

X's & O's—crossed

Diagonally to form,

A line leading, where?

Tarot cards thrown down,

Heart's fortune forecast before,—

Love's whims will survive.

Spilikins’ your game,

My game always Mikado,—

Was it just the name?