After reading the summary I was expecting them to actually be best friends already. I was hoping for the good stuff to happen quickly. So does this mean the first chapters are going to be about how they formed this 'best friend' friendship?

Anyway, as first chapters go this seemed like a lot of information (in the beginning at least) that should probably be spread out. I'm thinking we don't need to know about her father in the first chapter especially since that's not something you want to think about everyday either. Anyhow, off to the next chapter!

Okay, I finally searched the girl. It's not my picture, thank God.

I literally had to make a new account to be able to message you. Bummer! :

Hello,

This is really awkward since I can't really PM you, thus everyone else can read this. But anyway, I'm writerbunny10 (author of Seven Minutes in Hell) and I read your "private" messages just a few minutes ago, telling me that someone's plagiarized both our stories - I just want to tell you that I am not babykenzie123. I don't even have any idea about this whole thing. I also cannot believe that she has my picture. Maybe she even used my old pictures, but I don't really know how she got one of them. I haven't opened my FP account in almost three years, and I transferred my story to Wattpad (which is safer, where no one can plagiarize anything), about a year and a half ago. I think. Or maybe two years ago...I really can't remember since I don't exactly write stories anymore.

I tried to check babykenzie123, but I'm at school, and the college doesn't allow students to get online on widely known sites; I did Google her though, and her stories are on Wattpad. I just can't believe she would even have the guts to put our stories in the same site my original story - now called Crushing on Royalty by ESchwarz - is placed.

I'm really sorry for replying at such a late time. I'm in college and it's been pretty hectic for me and I really can't open my old account anymore because it's been a while and I completely forgot my password. I just had this nostalgia and I wanted to check my old FP story (where I originally posted everything). I just want to also say thank you for warning me. I'll be checking on Wattpad later and probably report the girl. Even though I don't write anymore and I barely post anything and open my account, well, I still worked hard writing that story when I was sixteen and I'm sure you worked hard for yours as well.

Best of luck!

Eliza
writerbunny10/ESchwarz

Hi there,
My name is Angharad and I’m part of a team of readers and writers that have our own blog called ‘the – literary . tumblr . com’ (without the gaps). If you’d like to check it out and follow us, that would be great! In short, we are a writer's resource blog. We provide original and fanfiction recommendations, writing tips, workshops and resources, story critiques and graphics help. I’m an Original Fiction Recommendatory Reader for the blog, which means I scroll through the Most Recents of the fictionpress site daily to find the best original stories and hidden gems that I think other people should get the chance to read. I’m happy to say that I’ve recommended your story to the blog, so congratulations! If you want to see my recommendation you should visit the tag ‘Angharad’s Recs’ and try and find it

This was a really amazing story. It had a lot to it that a lot of other stories on this website don't have. I honestly think that you could get this published and I know for a fact all my friends would read it. This story was truly amazing and next to the summer I turned pretty trilogy and the perfect chemistry series this is my favorite "book" and after reading those books I never thought I'd find something I liked just as much as those. I plan to read your other stories on this website and I hope I'll like them just as much as I do this one. Keep writing!
grace

i love this story. it had so many twist it in

This story is so good so far! What's gonna happen!?

This is the best story on this site! I loved it so much! :D When I read the reviews at first I didn't know why everyone liked Sean so much but now I see why! He's my favorite character too! I'm glad you added more stuff with Joey in it because he was my other favorite character! I even liked Courtney and I couldn't believe it when she died! )': I never read a story on here where the writer killed a teenager like you killed her. That takes GUTS! AND GARRETT TO! SO SAD! I wish I found this story earlier so I could've voted to save them! At least Sean lived and got to meet Mal and kiss Cole! OMG, that part where he kissed Cole was great! OK I think I'm gunna read your other story now. I hope its as awesome as this one was!

when tom said that he was put in a orvanage and adopted.. that reminded me about the story that joey told adam.

Now we were off of back roads and onto the main road. The good news was this road ran straight for a while. The bad news was…there was a red light right up ahead.

"DAWN, STOP!" Chelsea yelled as we approached it.

"Aw, fuck that! I'm gonna get a ticket anyway!" she yelled back.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Please don't kill Sean though! Kill Steve instead! Nobody likes him!

Normally he'd insult me or say something along the lines of "Your existence just makes my life harder", or "I wish your father was still here so I didn't have to deal with you", or "Where did you put the fucking frying pan? I need it to make dinner for you ungrateful bitches!"

I was gunna wait until after I finished your book before I reviewed but this part was too good to ignore. Its my favorite line in the story so far! XD Can't wait to see how it ends! (:

The twins better not die!

Your story(ies?) has(have?) kept me up all night for not one, not two, not three, not four, but FIVE nights. i spent each whole night reading this and i dont regret it... until i crash at school the next day.

i love your plots! i mean, i like to guess and stuff and when i see through the plot there's that much fun taken out of reading the story but your plots are crazy the way they twist and turn. i mean, its really dramatic, but not overly dramatic imho. and, even when the plot is a little see through, you have LOADS of epic comedy to cover up or even boost the story making it more interesting. EPIC. i may or may not have used some lines on my family, to their great annoyance. thanks for that :D

i think that some parts when Sean goes a little crazy, i wasnt able to catch it very well. i mean, i cant understand it because he doesnt talk or think crazy and suddenly BAM evil thoughts and actions. never really hated him though, he's hilarious. a once-upon-a-time best friend of mine's name was Sean. (:

i also had trouble imagining red-black tint, but hey. i'm a noob. im sure it looked fantastic in your mind and everyone elses, i'm just imaginationally impaired :/ and i can't really picture Eve that well... like i said. i'm a noob.

most of th time i end up skimming when i read, but because heartbreaker is smooth and flowing AND action-packed i skimmed very little. :D and i have short attention spans (:

i'm waiting (im)patiently for a HtCaK update :D i'm sure it'll be more epic, really wanna read more (: i'm a professional all nighter (unnecessary lame comment)

Oh my gosh, I lol'd so hard when Sean started singing that song from Hercules!

I hate the song "Down", too. *Shudder* D: