As much as I hate Sean, I love him! I know that makes no sense, but he's confusing!

I already know I'm going to hate Courtney, just from the way she was treating Adam xD. And how mad is Cole at Adam and Sean? Did he get what they were talkin about in the bathroom?

ANd... I'm good at predicting! lol just joking x3 But you're a lot like my cousin Angie, and it's not hard for me to read her lol.

Anyways, please update soon! x3

Sora-chan

I've seen Jesus Christ Superstar! :D Images are a million times better now! Hah the Adam. Sean. Steve. Sean part was funny! Hah, Sean is a pretty funny . Evil laughing...hmm, even Shane doesn't do that. I wonder what that means...

Great Chapter, Adam's and Sean's relationship was shown excellently in this chapter and Sean fail-reflexes are a clever character flaw. xD I don't think Shane would survive with Sean's reflexes considering he has heavy objects thrown at him frequently.

I loved the FMBYG reference with the comment. (it was that, right?) Aw, Aiden and Sean don't know what you can call a girl without a knee (or heavy object) in hitting their man parts. Knowing Shane, he'll have that happen to him. Otherwise it'll end up being some stupid comment "I want to know how much pain you go through every month" that'll lead to Rachel hitting him in his man parts with a fire extinguisher (or something to that extent)

Hah! My MJ story was that I was taxi-ing in a plane from Paris to LA (I live in LA) and everyone was texting and like "OMG Michael Jackson Died!" and I was like... I'm home.

Until next time and sorry for the novel review.

It's a good thing you were talking to me when you posted this, otherwise I'd have to wait to read it! xD And before I start the review, I must say this. HOLY CRAP! 14 inches of snow? I didn't even know that was humanly possible! OK, on with the review!

Omg! I don't know if I should feel sorry for Steve or not. But hey, that's what he gets when he messes with Sean! I agree with Adam; that fainting thing was pure genius! :D

OK, so now we know the general gist with Courtney, but what about her mother? Why do they all keep making references to her? Can you give me a hint since I'm one of your online besties? Please? Don't make me beg! ...Which I'm already doing!

Alright, I can't threaten to kill you if you don't update soon cuz that would get the fictionpress police after me, so I'm just going to ask you politely. Please update the next chapter as soon as you can! :]

Hola! XD I've been busy so I just finally got to these chapters and I love them! Awesome job! And no fear, even though Sean is my favorite still, Adam is a close second :) Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm really looking forward to it :D

Oh! I have more then one prediction! I don't think they're all gonna happen though xD

1.) Cole will tell Eve and she'll be very upset with Adam

2.) She goes to Sean to ask him about Steve

and...

3.) Eve runs into Courtney and Jeff

That's all! :-) Such a nice chapter! The tampon and condom thing was really funny too. I can imagine Cole doing that... at the age of 5 of course x3. SO I hope you can update soon!

Sora-chan

Omg it's all so dramatic!

It's so sad that Adam, the heart breaker, was the actual victem in his last situation where the girl was pushing herself on him and he didn't really like it but the brother thinks its all his fault when in reality it has never been his fault because his mom ran away and he was stuck with an abusive uncle who only gave him two choices, break hearts, or die. Horrible! Omigod... you HAVE to update soon! Or else I just might die from... from... from insert-situation-here! lol

not dying from heart attack from drama story

what?

I'd die from not dying from a heart attack from this story.

oh...

I love how the mood of this chapter changed. It was funny, sentimental, intense and bittersweet all wrapped up into one awesome chapter!

I'm not sure why, but this was my favorite line: "Nothing like screaming something random at your date to set the mood for a slow dance!"

That really made me laugh. Sure, the other stuff was funny, but that line was my favorite. OH! And the movie reference was from Finding Nemo! I WIN! :D

And Cole's gonna tell Eve, but I don't think she's gonna believe him. Idk why, but I get the feeling that Cole and Eve's friendship is really gonna get tested in the chapters to come. I can't wait for more! :]

yes, i didn't log in nor am i using capitals. I'm at my grandma's house so, yes, I am the pathetic idiot to give you two hits. Now...this review sounds overly dramatic xDD

Well, Adam and his random distractions make my day sometimes. haah pug with indigestion..what am I doing?

Sorry, this review's gotta be quick cause now everyone's eating. Cole...Cole won't until the time is absolutely necessary. And yes, Eve should believe him. Hah, I was going to name my main character in my next book Evelyn and I was like "it doesn't sound that old.." then I realized the book's set in teh 1930s xDD

As for your killing discount... Jack is willing to slightly lower the price...he just might want something weird out of it like a Bop-it or Batman Legos or condoms or something.

Hah, his "I was doing (blank) when Michael Jackson died.." is he was having sex with teh villain of the spin off. And he blatantly tells Rachel this while dressed like MJ, cleaning up bloodstains from his clothes, then proceeding to moonwalk out while singing "Billie Jean."

When I was reading this, I immediately thought of you. XD The way Eve phrases things reminds me alot like you and it's a good thing. Adam reminds me of my own character I use in a fanfiction...if my character wasn't quite 'tormented' as he is...;U

Anyway, the way you wrote makes me feel like Eve is telling me what happened to her almost. ;o Ya know whut I'm saying?

I haven't seen any horrific grammatical/spelling error and I was interested all the way to the end. I just may go and read the second chapter if I weren't so tired.

Adam is so darn stubborn :/ I wanna smack him really hard right now and tell that he so likes Eve! I loved this chapter! Sean is evil because he ate Adams donut and almost killed a Wal-Mart truck driver. HAHAHAHA! O.o Keep Writing!

Wow, how long has it been since I reviewed this story? I just read the last four chapters now!

I don't even have the slightest guess as to who that mysterious person is. I want to say Steve, but that seems way too obvious. I'm going to guess that it's Jeff for now. I didn't think it was him at first, but this chapter makes me suspicious.

So, this whole confusion thing going on with Courtney. This is just a stab in the dark, but did she screw Sean thinking he was Adam at some point? Then she screwed Adam and found out about the mix up, which led to her hating both twins. That's just a guess on my part. Adam mentioning Sean at the end of the chapter while thinking about his obviously awkward first time kind of gives me that feeling. As for his constant attention to his tie, I'm not sure what that's about. Knowing you, you'll explain it at some point.

I can't wait for the next update! I'll put you on my alert lists just in case! :]

Wow, I didn't expect that! What did Adam do to Courtney? (Other than screw her, obviously). And why does his tie make him think of her? Hmm...

A more important question for me, though, is what did Adam do that made Jeff's mom lose her job? Was it even his fault, or is this just a misunderstanding? I'm about ready to explode with questions that you better answer soon!

Go Ahead, Adam. Keep lying to yourself. Are we gonna have to bring in the 5 Muses from Hercules to sing "I Won't Say I'm in Love" to you? xD Maybe that'll happen while Adam's on a drug trip! I think Sean would be funnier drugged, though.

Don't worry about rushing to update the next chapter. As I told you before, perfection can't be rushed! :] Thanks for another awesome chapter!

Oh the whole thing with Jeff, I'm guessing the Parkers had to seduce his sister? And court? Will that be explained in later chapters? Will I ever stop asking questions? jk xD

I loved Adams E-harmony profile for Joey! Lol soo funny! I kinda like Joey, he's so easy to make fun of. But my fav character is still Cole ;-)

Can't wait for the christmas formal dance! Please try to get it up soon if you can.

Sora-chan

No jeff would make even more sense because he is involved and it would make sense it he was watching her to make sure adam did do anything bad. Also, HOLY CRAP! JEFF IS THE GIRLS SISTER? I knew he was imortant! Or else you wouldn't have given us his name right? Yeahh I'm so good LOL

And yeahh, you just keep telling yourself that Adam, you just keep telling yourself that...

I liked this chapter. Hah, Sean and the donuts was a wonderful conversation. I'm curious if Adam did more than just screw Courtney; she sounds pretty devastated. Oh Adam, so wannabe-cold. He knows he's not fooling anyone. ;]

Can't wait for the next chapter! Hah, if I have to be honest, I have no idea how this will become intense.

Somehow, some way, I WILL have Shane commit a hitman job while dressed like Michael Jackson. It's bound to happen. Just gotta figure out how he'd cover his face with while avoiding the ubber creepy MJ mask. God, that'd be scarier if he just walked around like that than without the mask committing the murder.

If we're talking prices, the MJ costume with Steve's murder is extra. In all seriousness.