OMG I know! I saw something like that at the Hot Topic I visit frequently too! And I LOVED The whole burning Elmo thing. Hilarious!

I like how you make some chapters really serious, but then lighten the mood with a chapter like this. It's very refreshing

Ok... so it's not Sean... JOEY! OR STEVE? NO... Jeff! Yeah, either Joey or Jeff. That's my guess xD

Please do continue soon, I'm starting to reaaly love this story!

Sora-chan

Stupid Sean! -_- He always interupts at the most awful cutesy scenes! Lol XD

Um... My favorite part was when Adam and Eve had their little moment! SO cute!

Is she gonna find out about Steve's abusive habits soon? It would add an interesting plot twist if she found out sooner. Hm...

Anyways, hope to hear from you son!

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Sora-chan

Lovez it again! You work magic with those hands of yours xD

Um... I didn't reaaly have a favorite part of this chapter. It was all pretty good... No complaints from me :-)

Sorry it took so long! Real life sucks DX

Anyways, please continue soon!

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Sora-chan

Sorry about my friend. She's pretty hyper and ever since I let her read your story, she's been obsessed with it!

And I still love it! Just like every other reviewer, I have no idea who this mysterious creeper person is. Hmm...maybe it's someone who wasn't introduced yet. I don't think it's Steve; that would be way too obvious, and you're NEVER obvious! This is a stretch, but I would love if it was Tim Spalding! :] I know that won't happen, though, even though that would kick some serious butt if it did.

Can't wait for another update! :]

Hi! I'm friends with I luv JD! (here's a fun fact for you, Miss Grace; JD stands for Johnny Depp!) Your a fan of him, rite? I saw it on your profile thingie.

Anyways, this story rocks my socks! (Hehe, I like that saying!) Sorry, I like to abuse the exclamation point. Even tho I don't like Hot Topic, I still love your story! I think the creeper is Cole! Lmfao! That would be really funny! Or maybe its Monica!

Oh, and you should def. make Eve hook up with Sean at some point. You know what I mean by "hook up"! ;] Srry, I have a perverted mind sometimes! I'm on my friend's computer & she wants to review too, so I'm gonna go before she stabs me! Peace out!

-Triple L!

Can't wait till I get the skills to write an amazing story just like this one. ]

Aww, poor Evie! I mean...Eve! xD She always ends up getting embarrassed in every way, shape and form when around the Parker twins.

Honestly, I think the creeper is Jeff. Idk why, but I just have that feeling. He's definitely going to show up again in this story, though. I can feel it. Is he gonna be like Jake in FMBYG? I hope not. I didn't like Jake. I don't think I'm going to like Jeff, either.

So, I don't want to get too off topic again, so I'll just end with a good job and a request to update soon! :]

ah! scary stalker dude!

OMG is it steve?

its really funny, my stepdads name is steve :):) although he isnt a phsycopath like this one is... :D

Oh wow... Oh WOW LOL

That sucks for her! LOL

And it's Steve no don't in my mind

She said it was too late for Adam and Sean and the person was creepy and not affraid of Adam

So... Thats the only person I could think. At first I thought it was like Jeff or something

But then I thought against it

I am very happy that you updated. I can say that much. As for the glucose, the only reason I understood it was my science teacher is delusional and gave us 50 high school level chemical equations and told us we'd get 30 extra credit points if we do it. With the aid of the internet, I pulled it off.

I liked this chapter! I remember in 6th grade I was obsessed with Hot Topic, and Kate, hah. I don't think we have stoned HT workers in LA. Batman references win. Hah I wish there really was a video of Elmo on fire. (not that I hate Elmo, it's just...HAh I'd prefer to set Dora on fire) ...I'm honestly unaware of who the creeper is. Steve or Eve's dad.

Also, Shane would be honored to kill Steve. Hah, the prequel is going to give some wild costumes for his hitman jobs. I've got K member, Phantom, crappy Halloween costume, hockey mask, the Joker (of course) and ... possibly MJ. Who knows with Shane?

Hello again! Sorry for not reviewing earlier! I've been really busy lately.

Awesome chapters just like they always are! :] I honestly think Adam did it because Steve told him to. I bet he'll start doing flirty stuff later because he likes her, but for now, I think he's doing it because Steve's controlling him. I'm probably wrong, but that's what I think.

Does Eve like Sean? That would be the funniest love triangle ever! Cole's really gonna hate it if she likes, not only Adam, but Sean as well. Poor guy, stuck between his love for his best friend and his hatred for the guy(s) she likes. :[ And random additional thought, but you should kill Monica. Idk where that came from, but she annoys me, even though she was only mentioned once or twice in the last two chapters.

OK, I'm rambling now. I'm kinda tired, so I'll wrap it up now. Can't wait for another update! :]

He had to have done it because he liked her...right? ]: Right? Please?

Awe snap!

meaner!

ADAM'S AN UNCLE HATER!

Of course, we all are, arent we?

OMG! EVE LOVES SEAN! CUZ HE IS AWESOME!

ESPECIALLY ON MONDAYS! YEAH! AWE SNAP! COOLIO! YEAH!

... yeah. So see ya!

Update soon pretty please!

~Micki

Ah! I love this story! And does it make me a bad reader if I still like Sean best? lol Can't wait for the next chapter XD

Adam's doing it because he's following Steve's orders but will end up- er, no. He's just doing it 'cause he likes her ;)

I am actually feeling very accomplished. I'm in 8th grade and I understood (and have seen) the glucose problem before! WOO! Although I can't say science is my favorite subject... I'm a history nerd! :D

Anyways, fun two chapters. I just have to sludge through 1 more chapter then the roller coaster of my story begins. And...then it stops. Then it pretty much starts up again and never stops.

Also, I want to inform you that in Going Down with a Smile I kill someone named Steve :D