Reviews for I'm in Love With a Professional Heartbreaker
I 3 JD chapter 8 . 1/21/2010
Hello! It's been a while, hasn't it? I just happened to be on here tonight and I noticed that your story was on page one. I read the first few chapters before, but I decided to review your newest one now!

I really like this story. I'll have to agree with everyone else on Sean. Even though he's "evil", I still like him. Why do I have a feeling that Eve's going to fall in love with him instead of Adam? That would be a strange twist! I hope you continue soon!
Solomon's Demise chapter 6 . 1/18/2010
Ooh Poor Adam! Please PLEASE kill Steve! Make it painful too!

I honestly like chapters from Sean's perpective better. I think it's because he's the funny, sarcastic twin.

Is Sean going to find someone, or is he gonna be single the entire time? I was just kind of curious xD

Anyways, sorry for the shorter review, but I hope you can continue soon :-)

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo Sora-chan
Hannicki chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
omf fricken g!

this is freaking amazing!

love Love LOVE it!

i love adam and i love eve and i love cole I EVEN LOVE SEAN!

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!

lovelovelovelove LOVE it! its so amazingly funny ans cute and sad and suspenceful and sweet and awesome and amazingly amazingness...

even if half of those werent real words lol xD

please please please freaking update flippin' fast!

LOE ITT! IT'S MY LIFEE! lol:)
Alexilaihorox chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next!
Hannicki chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
LOL xD He so obviously has a brother that looks like him haha.
thenutrunningthenuthouse chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
hey, even if I was half asleep while reading this chapter, I am happy to say I got it and I'm still enjoying this story! Well, if that's the case with a freezer, I can't wait for chapter 20! If we're getting a roller coaster, I'm buckled up and ready to go!

Hah, my writing has gone through some odd phases. So I've been choosing between a psychological thriller type spin off of The Domino Effect Trilogy with Shane's future teenage son (obvious spoiler...oh well it doesn't really matter) and 80 Feet Below. All it took was one status on Facebook for my editor, whose word is like God to me, to say go for the spin off.

So now I'm having tons of fun with that. So far, I've got 2 innocent deaths, one mental breakdown, one failed presentation, an awkward parent-teacher conference, drinking, exploring dangerous crap, murderous old gang members, and a sexy b*tch psycho murderer.
Live4Lolz chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
Aww! I feel bad for Adam! :[ I'm dying to know what happened last time that makes him so bitter. And is Sean gonna go after Eve for him? I really hope not! That would be one messed up love triangle!

I think you should've made Monica the target. That would've been freaking hilarious! But then again, if you did that, there wouldn't be much of a plotline, would there? I can't wait for another update! :D
Live4Lolz chapter 5 . 1/10/2010
Okay, I don't have a lot of time to leave this review, so I'll make it quick!

It's an awesome chapter, as usual! :] And I THINK I know what Sean's mistake was. I'll PM you soon and you'll have to let me know if I'm right or wrong.

I love this story! Between Aunt Jemima and Sean's chicken nugget rant, you had me in tears from laughing so hard! I can't wait for chapter 6! :]
Solomon's Demise chapter 5 . 1/10/2010
LOL! Loved this chapter! xD The only mistake I found was when Sean called Cloe Collin.

Steve is an Asshole! Please tell me he either dies, gets put in jail, or goes to Hell (which kinda involes the first one... whoops!)

That is a funny coincidence (sp?)! A & E is also a channel! o.O

Any ways, take your time updating. This week is semester exams for me too :-/

Sora-chan
thenutrunningthenuthouse chapter 5 . 1/10/2010
Hah, I like Sean and his inability to remember anything! And that bathtub thing...another classic. Score 1 for AG91! In terms of the chapter, Adam does owe Sean a lot after that. I mean, he didn't *exactly* mess up his identity and got him a date. Pretty good considering what Sean probably wanted to do.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with mid-terms. I have 1. It's math. So, SO typical.
Alexilaihorox chapter 5 . 1/10/2010
I loved this chapter! Thanks for updating it! And so far I love Sean, he's my favorite twin XD We'll see if that still rings true later, but for now that's where I stand lol Can't wait for the next one!
Solomon's Demise chapter 4 . 1/2/2010
Poor Adam! Sean has been too much of an asshole for me to say poor Sean, but I do have a little bit of sympathy for him.I think Sean will try to be nice and Adam-like, but Eve will do something to tick him off.

My favorite line in this chapter, which wasn't dialogue, "I like being an Asshole!" Lol xD

Anyways, please continue :-)

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Sora-chan
Solomon's Demise chapter 3 . 1/2/2010
I love this story! But, I have to be honest, I don't like it as much a Forgive Me Before You Go. That one was just so sweet and it was the first awesome story I read on this site. This is still a great story though :-)

This chapter had me laughing so hard when Eve fell onto Adam XD Very well written. 5/5
Alexilaihorox chapter 4 . 1/2/2010
I love this story too! Both Adam and Sean are amazing! XD I love them! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
My goodness its very good! please, carry on :)

I wish he had a lip ring though haha
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