Reviews for Ripples
Anise Cary chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
had to read this through a second time before I could review, I read it aloud to myself the second time. I love the flow of this poem. The imagery you use is wonderful and you've done a great job in your word choices. I love the second to last line: All those blank pages, clothed in opulence…, I may have to write that one down. Excellent job, keep writing.
RaccoonQueen chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
This poem is wonderfully done. It has a beautiful meaning and great imagery. I hope that you write more poetry in the future.

Keep writing

Someone-Whos-Not-Important chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
SO beautiful. Only your words could describe how good this is.
CassandraStacy chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
This is really beautiful . . . it really shows how love, and life really, has the possibility to move on far beyond our time. And just the beauty of every small thing that we often take for granted. Wonderful!

cookiewolf chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
aww its a mysterious poem and i like it0 i sort off get it but then sort off not but thats a good thing) its a pretty poem though.
WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Beautiful, i know we're not suppose to just write Beautiful, but honestly i can't find any sort of crisism to say because i loved it all, really good job here.


Bekalicious chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
That is a nice, sweet poem. Goodjob!
music4evah chapter 1 . 1/9/2010


I thought I could write...

I was rather wrong...

... I would talk about the meaning and everything, but I'm still trying to rap my mind around the whole thing. It's amazing.

But it has a different meaning for everyone, you know, who reads this.

So, some people could see it the way you do, and others see it in an entirely different way. I'm glad I read this.

Thanks for all your amazing stories that you write!
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Wonderful expressions! It makes this piece lovely and delightful.

Lines like 'Deem it ephemeral, see it complete.' and 'Blessings escried in a deep pool of sorrow, a lake with no reflections All those blank pages, clothed in opulence...' make it very nice to read. It's really lovely.

I like the message conveyed here too. It's reminding me to enjoy life, things that are significant, meaningful, beautiful, little, sad, joyous... They are all part of life, and should be treasured no matter what it is.

I really enjoyed reading this. You did a great job. Keep writing!