Reviews for Size 14
sophiesix chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Love the African comparisons, they made my day! I like how you play with stereotypes here, and I think would've liked it even more if you messed with them even more ;)! Stereotypes exist because they work and are found so often, and yet its often hard to find someone who fits it perfectly, though many kill themselves trying. Love how some aspects of her change dramatically, and other stay very much teh same. Great Stuff!
MissGreySunshine chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I like this. It's very well written. I also love how you portrayed food as being a good thing and not an enemy. You took a skinny girl and made her a beautiful, both inside and out, young woman. It's inspiring!
FlirtyBirdie chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
the only part about this is that it doesn't seem quite realistic that she would loose her hair in only a week. i do like how you wrote it tho. :D
KillaCupcakes chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I loved this! It was very encouraging, short, sweet, and to the point.