wow - this was great - short, sweet, powerful, and great. I feel for Caleb - what happened to make him think this way . . . I just want to hug him! :(

Absolutely love it. That thought, The thought - I think about it a lot. I love the way you expressed it with this story. True living. Very well written, and thoroughly appreciated.

'Careful. I've laid my dreams on the ground and you're just about walking all over them.'

'He came round, walking with his hands in his pocket and his mind in his eyes...'

I've said it before, I'll say it again, you're a great writer and I'm so glad I found you.

It's lovely, Liz. ;)

Yep, it's me! Your name-twin. How ya doin'?

So, now that I've reviewed you, I feel like I've accomplished something now.

Elizabeth

Ohmygod. Your stories are seriously awesome.

They really make you think. About life, your dreams etc.

This story made me cry (again. I cried after I read Train Rides.)

Great job (: The last line was awesome.

hey fizwiz! that was a cool story. kinda like one of the commentaries we did... not so much a story, but an idea expressed through peoples actions! i liked it! and yes, i am going to continue to use lots of exclamation marks cos it accentuates the goodness and makes people feel better! so yeah, i really liked it, there were times were it got a little jumpy and non-flowy, but aart from that, AWESOME! and im going to stop rambling now! see ya tomorrow!

Brilliant. One of the best stories I've ever read on FP.

That is sad. Really sad, heart-wrenching and it gets you thinking. I liked it. I loved it, actually. It's sad, it's pretty simple. But it's deep. Dark, deep and naive. I like it. I like it very much.

Aha! I knew there was something familiar with the line 'I’ve laid my dreams on the ground and you’re just about walking all over them.' The Clothes of Heaven, if I'm not mistaken. It's one of my favourite poems. I mean, I don't like all of WBY poems but that one is an exeption. Beautiful story, by the way.

Keep up the gorgeousness.