Ok, I’m not good at reviewing poetry because it always feels like more of a free for all than prose.

This did make me smile though: all the periods gave it a curtness that was akin to that feeling you get of ‘oh, typical’. Especially with throwing the paper in the bin, missing and trying again. The details like the ‘perfect ball’ worked as well. There seemed to be a mix between the short words and longer sentences. I think I’d vote for a few more of the longer sentences to make the flow of it a bit more interesting and less jumpy. But I liked this, and the feeling it created of writing by yourself.

Brill!

And see? THis is how it is for me... Especially if you elaborate on the THROW AWAY THROW AWAY!

It's lovely, dear ;)

And thanx for reviewing my work as well!

Pocket :3

Hahaha love this one! Great style! :D Keep writing!

~Anna~ _

Haha, this is genius and made me smile xD

for me it's, fingers on keys, new document, empty head, delete, mess with it a bit, fix up, read, share with you, read again, fix up, delete or save. yeah.

but that's never poetic enough.

good work, good work.

this was good

What I go through every time! Love it!

Nice one! That actually made me laugh out loud! I like it XD

Sophie :3

Hello! I am here to and to your 'Total Win.'

I think this describes me very well when I write, and probably tons of other chatoc-brained people (I certainly hope I'm not the only one).

Excellent job. (: