Reviews for Vicarious
Slaaty chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
The use of vocabulary and image was great. Looking at it, I thought the rhythm wouldn't flow well... but it actually works. (Kudos to you! :D) How'd you make you it work?
Sandia chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Perfect! *-*
giacide chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I really liked this. Its simple but really gets to the point. It reminds me of a relationship i have with someone. Also loved your last line.
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/14/2009


That was really good.

You put a bad spin on what seemed to be a purely positive thing.

Very creative.

Dreams have been used so many times, but you've managed to do it originally.

Well done :D