|Reviews for Vicarious|
| Slaaty chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
The use of vocabulary and image was great. Looking at it, I thought the rhythm wouldn't flow well... but it actually works. (Kudos to you! :D) How'd you make you it work?
| Sandia chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
| giacide chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I really liked this. Its simple but really gets to the point. It reminds me of a relationship i have with someone. Also loved your last line.
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
That was really good.
You put a bad spin on what seemed to be a purely positive thing.
Dreams have been used so many times, but you've managed to do it originally.
Well done :D