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Unknown Error 4.0 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009 Hey, great poem. I love the first line. "I hate feelings". It's true, isn't it, that if we didn't have feelings, we wouldn't have pain...but at the same time, if we didn't have feelings, how could we feel love? "I pray to become numb". The last stanza was powerful. It intrigues me, because it's true that when people say "I'm not like all the others!" it's a good thing. "And yes, you['re] not like them"...I think this is an interesting way to respond. Keep writing, ~Con |