aww. that's amazing! This is my fav so far! good job

LOL i'm so sorry. TO everyone reading the reviews, i signed into -Bluetwilites- account, cause i help her manage her account, and accidentally commented on one of her thingies , with her name as the person who wrote it... lol.

Anyways, everything that was written was the truth, except that I commented on it...not -Bluetwilite- Thanx for understanding. :)

I luv it!I really like the emotion going through this whole poem. This is awesome! Please add more stuff up on here, your a really talented writer :)

very nice. ;) of course, i think it would've been better had i not been listening to atreyu, but...ah well. still very good. :)

Wow you've definately been through a lot. Always be positive and write on, this is a well written piece.

~Anna~ _