|Reviews for Unfair|
| empressdawn chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Wow. Tender and heartbreaking, at the same time. This is seriously a really good story!
| o0-flying high-0o chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
So I just made this account and it won't let me do anything yet, so I thought I'd just look through general fiction, and who should I find on the first page?
Anyway, you know I love your writing. This is different to your others, much more internal, but still lovely. Eh, probably not the right word, but still.
'Tis probably not as smooth in places, 'and she, being a religious woman, believed he would spend eternity in Hell for it'. Nothing technically wrong, just sounds slightly clunky. Or maybe I'm just being pedantic.
Anyway, very nice... I'm going to go find Too Long now because I can actually favourite it now :D
| GermanSam chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Ha! First reviewer!
*Does little dance*
tsk tsk! You shouldn't be starting a new story without finishing your others!
...but it's still a good start...