|Reviews for Ti voglio bene, and i miss you|
| InspiredAngel chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I like how you added italian into it.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
This was beautiful. Great work. :D
| Lady Livia chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
This is THE sweetest thing i have EVER read!
Now i'm in some silly hopeless romantic mood!
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
When under the smiling caress of a stormy star
- how did you think of that? I adore it to pieces! I bow to your talent!
hearing your silent symphony
- okay, I was in rapture before, but now... well, times adoration by ten... perhaps I have hit obsession?
I'll stop with the copy an paste now... your whole poem might end up here otherwise... I keep reading it and wishing I was so brilliant!
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Aww, this is beautiful. The Italian, although confusing, adds to the whispering & night effect. Once in a while I like a little indulgingly romantic poem to make me all warm and fuzzy inside XD
| Wynter Storm chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
lovely as always good work
Loved this line the best
For eternal galaxies and pantheons without charade, forever will I dance your masquerade
| Saurosuchus chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
nice job. the italian added a nice flair I thought.
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Beautiful and flowing. Echoes the sensual longing for an absent lover in the Bible's "Song of Solomon." The Italian phrases add a touch of exotic mystery.
| Little Miss Cullen Cutie chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Ok, even though I didn't understand half of that, it was still very beautiful!
~Little Miss Cullen Cutie~
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I like that you used 'Ti voglio bene' instead of 'Ti amo.'
"The smiling caress of a stormy star." I like the 'Sturm und Drang' imagery here.
"Eternal galaxies and pantheons without charade." This is a very pretty line.
I also love the repetition of "I miss you" in this poem - it's very haunting. :)
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Oh this is lovely. I don't understand the words that aren't in english but that's okay because it looks lovely on the screen. Good job overall. :) Keep writing!