Reviews for Where I Fit In |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey wheres ur story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story and when are you going to put it up again?Its so sad its gone :( so please put it up again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It's so awesome! Ryan really loves her! It's so sweet! And the whole rockband and country gir thing is a really cool twist- because they hate her music event though she sort of lke thiers. |
![]() ![]() I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FANTASTIC ending! I love the name Addison. Gold star for pumping out the epilogue so quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love their names, they have a nice sound to it and when spoken, it rolled of the tongue nicely xD The plot's nice too, I blabbered the whole thing to my sister and she's reading it too~ I'm gonna read your other stories!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. Cutie Patutie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! AH! IT'S OVER! TT THANKS SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY! :D :D :D :D getting ready to read Parker's story now! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story. It was so cute and had such a fuzzy warm feeling attached to it. Ryan and Avery are adorable. I can't wait to see if Addison becomes a troublemaker! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That epi came out so fast I almost got whiplash! Great ending to a great story. I'm so glad they didn't get away with their lies. That's an important lesson to learn. The scene with Ryan and the baby is so sweet and true to life. The most manly and non-kid-oriented of guys always melts when holding their own child for the first time! Don't let guys fool you, they have some innate nurturing instincts too. And finally Controlled Environment and Out of Control are going to tour together - a thrill for the characters and for all of us peeking in on the phone calls family. Isn't it amazing how we have never heard them perform - and never will (LOL) - and yet we get all excited about these fictional characters? What a tribute to your writing -that we can't get enough of them. OK, so if you are starting Parker's story right where this left off, are we going to see the combined tour in the next story? Andjust a reminder that we never did ge to see that jam session with Ryan and Avery. sniff sniff Can't wait to see the theme you chose for Parker's story - aftr all the crazy ideas we threw our. I'm sure it'll be unique. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw what a perfect ending. and i love that they named her addison. and that they're all going to tour together. pretty fantastic all around. i'm excited to read parker's story now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :)) Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was from Chapter 27: “Then why are you calling?” I think you meant "crying" there. :) Well, the end seemed a bit rushed, but it ended well, so that's good. And I want to get into Parker's story, so I guess this one had to end sometime, huh? Everything seemed to fall into place a little too quickly, but, again, it had to end eventually. I'm just glad you actually finish your stories, so kudos to you. And you're already posting the new one. I can't keep up with how fast you write. lol. Another RockFan story done...onto the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so sweet. cant wait for parker story to be up |
![]() ![]() a good ending _ |