|Reviews for Icicle Laughter|
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Brilliant as per usual!
| an everyday nobody chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I love this. Wonderful, lulling rhythm to the poem. It makes me miss things that I haven't even lost yet.
| When Eden Burns chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I can't remember if I commented on this one before, but I know I read it.
I feel like "moving" is the word I'd chose, but it doesn't quite do this piece justice. I felt a lot of emotion reading it . . . so that's pretty great writing on your part.
I think the imagery creates the mood and conveys the feelings incredibly well. Especially the part about the freezing wings. It's pretty hard to read, but in that good "it's drenched with feeling, and feeling means you're alive" way.
Basically, I feel like I should save this for future reference.
Anywho. I'm going to go back to trying to get this upload thing to work. ]
| Sword And Sorcery chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Good think the winter as almost gone.
Nice poem, though. :-)
| the art of being obsolete chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
"I know these words will freeze and fall"