Reviews for Christmas 1914
MonkeyFighter chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
wow i loved this! it was very real and well-written. great job!
the shattered star chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Inspector, I must say, I had an assignment similar to this, and you have truly done a wonderful job! I would agree with Linkmaste about the fact that the letters were a little overly long, but truly, this piece is wonderful. You went into the psychological aspect of the war, which I think isn't done nearly enough. I really enjoyed this. Bisous ~ RVL
Linkmaste chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
This was a good attempt at a story. I must give you credit. :)

I was a bit confused on the setting. Simply mentioning the year in your title does not prove you to be a good writer. Your grammar and dialogue are satisfactory but can use some editing. You should try to edit at least once before you put it on the website. It's not nice giving people headaches and fixing your grammar :). I also doubt Robert would give such long letters. Back in WWI, goverments would censor the letters. Just a snipet of information I thought you should know :).

Let me know when you actually write a decent story. I look forward to hearing you again.

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