| Reviews for immolation |
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   electrical moon chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 Great poem! I love the imagery. Your word choice is wonderful. |
| she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 1/21/2010 beautiful. |
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/21/2010 Marvelous flow of sound. I like how this is compact and condensed into a form that is quickly moving and vivid. Well written. MD:77. |
| rippling iris chapter 1 . 12/18/2009 wow this was totally breath taking. i love the imagery and the metaphors (especially the teeth/moon bit). very intense. |