Reviews for Guardian Angel
Octoberly chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Aw. Thats so sweet. You deserve a cookie.

But how do you come up with this stuff? There has to be some thing going on in your brain that makes you think of duch brilliant stuff... I will try to work that out someday... not today though.
DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
the flow on this is a little distracting. it goes from short lines to long lines, to long lines to short lines. and that's ok sometimes, but i don't think it works well in this piece. it's a little distracting. maybe you could add or remove syllables in certain lines to make them more equal?

i do like the message though that no matter what you're going through there is always going to be someone there for you. whether people believe that or not, i think it's something we need to hear.

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steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
This is very lovely and delightful. :)Write on!